The Lord of Veins | Shadow Slave - Reviews

Great stuff. What I can say5 STAR FOR EFFORT AND ALL BOOK STORY. GOOD STUFF READ PLEASEFULL SUPPORTMAKE MORE AND MORE BOOK LIKE THIS..HI AUTHOR BEST OF LUCK

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if youre looking for novel with the "same vibe" like i have mansion in the apocalypse. then this is the novel youre looking for.  i hope it can quickly pick up by webnovel

The idea that a samurai would EVER be in favour of gender equality, or even be aware of it as a concept shows how little the Author takes the book seriously. If the only spin in the novel separating it from generic trash is literally ignored, then by deductive reasoning this book can only be generic trash.

Story was good until he had to save that girl, horrible translation needs better grammar, but Yeah overall a good story with a unique storyline.

Imma be honest the stories alright, not too shabby but like it could rlly be better. I just think you could do better, so hopefully this review will give you some good ideas, but either way, explain cultivation better, I don't get it too much and it'll really help. give him a more unique character and maybe write a little better. Anyways, thanks for the story!

I just love it! It has the same vibe as Tha Gamer combined with The Arrow, both of which I love. There is only one thing that is frustrating. WHY. ISN'T. HE USING. THE. SKILL. POINTS?!

pls if you're enjoying this piece of work. put down a review. I love y'all. Don't forget to recommend 'em to your friends and family, let them share in the lovely fantasy.

The story has lots of potential.   It started with adrenaline pumping action in chapter 1 and it truly was a great reading experience.  I think the choice of 1st POV suits the story well since it's the experience of one person.  However, I also think that there is too much introspection (chap2) that some elements already become repetitive. It's also become slowpaced since he had not met anyone yet and still alone for two chapters.  Maybe I'm just impatient or I have become one since Chapter1 was quite full of action so the expectation was there.  In chapter3 he already met another character and some questions were answered, but only after paragraphs of introspection again.  Just a concerned reminder from one author to the next, be careful not to go to the purple prose territory.  Also try to eliminate redundancy.  All the best author! Keep on writing!

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